I got back canvas blow up of first print - liked it but room for improvement - possibly a bit too busy in one sector (less visible up close on flat computer screen). Need to understand final medium and not just how appears in the preliminary process. More focus on negative space and not be cuirtailed by shortcomings of original image. Learning - anything else would by folly.
One learns more from mistakes (even minor ones) - if observant - than from all the things that float by done right.
"Somehow, Always" is below - close to being finished.